Winter warrior

[Deadcell's]

Set on Winter Nogojev 1.1 by Keygety's, Me (Deadcell) and Syco Clow made a little Demo That u can download at ofp base ( www.ofpbase.com):: The full Campaign will be out in a few weeks hope u enjoy the Demo and would like some feed back of what u thought about Demo

[John C Flett]

Only just started but seems okay. Three obvious suggestions;

You need perhaps to be more careful with landmines and AI. Perhaps your intention, but I have seen my buddies commit suicide with great efficiency too many times. Mission one I kept finding myself sole survivor before the first shot was fired.

White text is perhaps a poor choice for use on a snowy background though I'm not sure theres anything you can do about that. Also you're grammer / spelling seems to be of a higher standard than I'm used to ( good work ) but you're use of 'U' for 'you' is a little out of place.

Finally, pace needs tweaking. Missions two and three are too compact. Draw them out a little. In two, throwing all the waves together is good russian tactics but too deadly. Stagger things a little so that there are ebbs and flows, especially in the case of the rear attack which just overwhelms the AI. Likewise mission three, we know whats going to happen but keeping us waiting. Use impatience against us, don't give us what we expect at the start.

Lastly, a request. Given your choice of setting I must insist on full exploitaton of the wonderful snowfall and aurora borealis. They give the island a unique touch ( and are rather sweet ).

Beyond that I'd say the stuff is simple but effective and I'd certainly be happy to see the full campaign. It has loads of potential and you should certainly keep at it.

[FSPilot]

Also you're grammer / spelling seems to be of a higher standard than I'm used to ( good work ) but you're use of 'U' for 'you' is a little out of place.

Speaking of grammar

' is an apostrophe. You use it to abbreviate words like don't for do not, and shouldn't for should not.

" is a quotation mark. You use it to quote other people. "I did not have sexual relations with that woman" for example.

An apostrophe is not a quotation mark.

Sorry, pet peeve.

[LoneSoldier]

Quote[/b] ]but you're use of 'U' for 'you' is a little out of place.

No offence mate. But "you're" is short for "You Are"

[Major Fubar]

Would you consider releasing the campaign as a series of co-op misisons, to be completed in order, similar to the Band of Comrades missions? I think it would be awesome...

[John C Flett]

Hey FS and Lone! I commented on Deadcell's good grammer. I made no claims about mine. I know it's well short of the mark in three languages ( Though I should have caught the "you're" if I'd reread my post ).

My spelling isn't much to write home about either.

And lets not even mention my setting the LOWEST EVER maths prelim mark at school.

Talking of grammer reminded me of this;

http://www.ifarchive.org/indexes....ma.html

A bit of nostalgia for those of us who used to play tex adventures. The player can be found here;

http://www.ifarchive.org/if-arch....e

Quite amusing but I failed badly.